1- i have my professor comments and i want you to correct them
2- to see the box and correct the essay of what is need to correct i put it in red
3- use these questions to added in the essay by answering them:
What effect does it have on the audience?
What do you think the painter’s intention was?
Who is the intended audience?
What rhetorical decisions are being made and why?
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